I watched her on the dance floor, moving in time with the music. Her jeans riding low on her hips, her taunt stomach begging to be touched, her long dark hair flowing down her back. Just the sight of her was making me wet.
She caught my eye as I started to walk towards her. With a wink she was in front of me. Her arms draped over my shoulders as I placed my hands on her hips. Slowly our bodies began to moved closer. Sliding one hand up her back, wrapping it in her hair I pulled her head back, exposing her neck to my tongue. Feeling her body grinding into mine was driving me crazy.
"Your place or mine?" She asked.
Does it matter?
So they kissed passionately and took it to the parking lot? Love your stuff.
ReplyDeleteThanks for sharing. Yes, that would be a great way to carry the story on. Shoot me an email at ttallgrass@yahoo.com .
ReplyDeleteHOT! Nope, it doesn't matter... More please!!
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ReplyDeleteTease? Yes, but isn't that what is such a turn on?
ReplyDeleteGreat job - I love it!
No. ;)
ReplyDeleteAnother hypnotic and beautiful post. I love it.
ReplyDeleteI wish that I could capture a scene as well as you do in so few words. I'm always so completely drawn in by your writing.
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Love it :) Great job, Gray!
ReplyDeleteHere's what I was watching yesterday. And somehow your story brought it right back to mind. Something about the jeans, low, taught stomach... oooh Plant is hot in that vid!!!
ReplyDeleteHaha sorry, your stories are always so vivid!
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=la42R5MX_PE
ReplyDeleteforgot to leave the link... must have been distracted by something... what was it?? oh... yeah.... plant's stomach. mmmmm
Tallgrass: ;)
ReplyDeleteComplicated Kitten: Working on it! hehehe
Heff: Isn't that the point?
Topaz: Thank you so much!
Nolen: You would say that. Hahah
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Emma: I think you write so much better. I honestly do.
Aleesuhn: Thank you hun!
Cande: You are so funny girl!
I think the key to your writing is you paint such a vivid picture with so few words that each reader fills in the blanks in the picture making it seem as it it was written just for them.
ReplyDeleteWell done, in my own picture the me talking is blonde and my h and I am watching from a table just off the floor.
If you are willing I would like to have a private conversation please email me.
ReplyDeleteOh wow...oh my. More, more more...
ReplyDeleteLove your vignettes baby... so much left for the imaginations!! Wonderful!
ReplyDeleteWhew... Can i borrow your mind for the evening??
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Gray,
ReplyDeleteyou just put me right there in the moment.
I have a question.Have you done a Beautiful Agony? Just asking because of the banner at the top of your post.
I did a Ishotmyself last November. Thinking about doing another sometime soon.
Nicely written.....reminded me of some memories...;)
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Damn. This is stunning.
ReplyDeletexoxo
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