Thursday, November 19, 2009

Addicted


The whispered words cause shivers in the dark.
The touch of your hand makes my body ache for more.
The taste of your lips, tongue and hot breath make me want to crawl into you.
The moments of high combined with incoherent muttering and
screams of passion make the need
all the more powerful. 

Then, you are gone.
Replaced by air, memories that fade too quickly and a intense desire to feel again.
My body aches, my mind screams and
I feel lost.
I trace the marks with my fingers,
caress my body with my eyes closed but it isn't the same.

And I realize,
I'm addicted.
Hopelessly.



12 comments:

  1. Ah, you tell it so well.
    It's nice to know others try to recapture it the same way I do...

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  2. Yes, I would say you were as well. Lovely prose.

    Happy Thursday. *smiles*

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  3. Topaz: Thank you..:)

    Diable Incarne: You'd think so eh?:)

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  4. Lovely short prose Gray...well written and reads so, so well :-)

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  5. I love the way you have captured this sentiment...just beautiful :)

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  6. God, I love your writing....

    Beautiful, Gray!

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  7. Heaven help me, I'm addicted!!!

    Hugs,
    kitten

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  8. Aye, addiction is a dangerous and wonderful thing.

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  9. I wish more people would write poetry...

    Good stuff...

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