Monday, December 28, 2009
When he says move, you move.
"Up," he said impatiently as he undid his belt. She stood there with her ass pressed against the hood of the car, unsure of what he meant. He stopped, looked at her expectantly then shook his head. Grabbing her by the hips he tossed her on top of the car, her dress flew up as she came down with a thud. Whipping his belt away from his body he quickly wrapped it around her wrists and pulled her hands above her head. Nudging her knees apart with his leg, the other hand settled between her thighs. He stared into her wide eyes as a car drove by.
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Oh, I hope this story goes on and on like the dressing-room stiry did!
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mmmm.. haha.. how i loved that.. the car goes by.. nothing makes you tighten up like those occasional cars.. :P
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ReplyDeleteOh I love it. Please continue.
ReplyDeleteVery nice. Your vignettes lately have been going to unexpected places and it's most intriguing. Thanks for sharing this one!
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Secretia: I'm not sure if this piece will continue. I tend to try to capture one moment in time. The longer stories are usually thoughts that someone else wanted to see written. But we shall see!
ReplyDeleteNitin: Ahh the joys of almost being caught. *sighs* ;)
spirited one: Did I catch you off guard?:)
Gregorio Martino: Thank you for stopping by and I just might..
Panserbjorne: It seems my writing follows my mind.;)
Fabulous Gray...always a treat baby!
ReplyDeleteI wouldn't say off guard... I just thought... could you imagine? I'm actually wondering what the other drivers would think. LOL It would be interesting to write a little scene from the other point of view. A couple driving down the street seeing something like that... both acting repulsed by what they see, but on the inside they're both wishing it was them :-D
ReplyDeleteVery well written!
Can I please ask for more?
ReplyDelete*sourires sauvages*
ReplyDeleteHappy hump day...
More please!!
ReplyDeleteWish I could get hubby to do some hot shit like that!!
I definitely like where this is going, also love the new look. Don't know how long you have had it, but I have been keeping up just on reader, so you don't get to see the actual blog..sorry..but I am here now and it is awesome!
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