Friday, April 30, 2010

Flash Fiction Friday!



He watched as she stared at the painting leaning against the wall. 
"She looks to be on fire," she spoke quietly.
"She is."

He pushed the dress off her shoulders, letting it pool around her feet. Slowly he brushed his thumb against her bottom lip before sliding his hand down the side of her neck. He guided her back to face the wall, next to the painting and left her standing there. 

Within a few moments she felt the smoothness of the brush down her back 
followed by a chill as the air hit the wet paint. 



Thank you Panserbjorne for this week's Flash Fiction Challenge of 84-94  words about the above picture
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14 comments:

  1. AnonymousApril 30, 2010 at 12:07 AM

    A painting! Of course! And here I really couldn't think of what to write about. Very nice, PP.

    ~Soren

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  2. Playfully YoursApril 30, 2010 at 2:32 AM

    What a beautiful picture.

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  3. AnonymousApril 30, 2010 at 4:26 AM

    Awesome!!

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  4. KatiaApril 30, 2010 at 4:55 AM

    Like your take on the picture! Nice post~
    Katia

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  5. The PanserbjørneApril 30, 2010 at 5:57 AM

    Oho, the art is the subject of cynosure here. I like, very much. Good take, Gray. Thanks for playing along this week!

    Also, I don't think Max and Clem are playing along this week. At least, they didn't mention it to me and there's no post up on their pages.

    -- PB

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  6. nillaApril 30, 2010 at 6:14 AM

    Oh! How lovely...art, and herself as the canvas for the 2nd portrait.

    I love LOVE your take on this!

    nilla

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  7. mouseApril 30, 2010 at 7:35 AM

    Gray...

    wow! The painting, your words...amazing! You are very gifted.

    Hugs,
    mouse

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  8. Diable IncarneApril 30, 2010 at 9:07 AM

    Nice angle and lovely story. *smiles*

    Happy Friday.

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  9. lilaApril 30, 2010 at 9:08 AM

    Wow!! I absolutely adore this take! lovely story.

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  10. AnonymousApril 30, 2010 at 4:07 PM

    Nicely erotic.

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  11. The SavageApril 30, 2010 at 4:21 PM

    Very sexy! Very sexy, indeed!

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  12. Luna MauvaiseApril 30, 2010 at 9:56 PM

    Lovely contribution, Gray! Happy FFF.

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  13. Amazon WomanMay 1, 2010 at 3:59 PM

    Very sexy and enjoyable really!

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  14. ---<--@May 3, 2010 at 10:53 AM

    I love this a picture that wakes up your soul and touches your mind and wakes your passion.

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