He left her panting on the couch, her blouse pushed up over her ample breasts and the skirt bunched around her waist. The glassy eyed expression she wore made him smile as he walked towards the kitchen.
She had mentioned once her husband was a bit OCD when it came to cleanliness. He laughed to himself as he hopped onto the counter, naked. Then wondered which would bother the old man more, the dirty wife or the dirty counter?
Thank you Panserbjorne for this week's Flash Fiction Challenge of 63-83 words about the above picture
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Nice!
ReplyDeleteSometimes, you gotta be dirty, right? :)
ReplyDeleteLove it!
ReplyDeleteGreat piece!
ReplyDeleteKatia
HAHAHA, nice. Happy Friday! :D
ReplyDeleteOMG....so so funny!!!
ReplyDeletexoxo, Crystal
I think I've been there before... well actually she wasn't anybody's wife... I think...
ReplyDeleteYay for making me recall like an old geezer! Great entry and happy FFF!
~Soren
You always seem to get so much out of few words.. Creative as usual..
ReplyDeletewait till he sees the ass prints on the counter ! LOL .. nicly done !
ReplyDeleteThis is great! :)
ReplyDeleteOh Gray! That was awesome!
ReplyDelete...put a big smile across my face.
That really made mouse smile...just very clever!
ReplyDeletehugs,
mouse
I loved this!! Made me laugh so much! Imagine if the husband walked it what a shock he would get!! Classic!
ReplyDeleteFreya xx
I rather think hubby would be more upset by the dirty wife. How lucky for said wifey that she has a playmate who likes that filthiness. :)
ReplyDeleteGood one, Gray! Thanks for playing this week.
-- PB