Friday, May 14, 2010

Flash Fiction Friday


The afternoon sun made the room hot. 
He had told her to strip off her clothes and 
wait in the old rocking chair. 
The wood felt smooth and unforgiving against her skin. 
He walked into the room and smiled before kneeling in front of her with a magnifying glass in hand. 
She looked at him questioningly as she wiggled uncomfortably in the chair.
" I just want to explore you very closely," he said as he spread her legs open and rocked the chair backwards.




Thank you Panserbjorne for this week's Flash Fiction Challenge of 60 - 120  words about the above picture. Please check out the other people who love to word count this Friday! 


14 comments:

  1. Very nice! Now strip off your clothes and
    wait for me in the old rocking chair. ;-)

    Happy FFF!

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  2. Not so unlike my own, *laughs* or maybe it is...

    Happy Friday, GK.
    HimSelf

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  3. Nice take on the picture as usual Gray!

    Hugs,
    mouse

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  4. Hmmm.... the inspection, squirmingly delicious.

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  5. Ah, inspections...

    Very nice take. Happy FFF!

    ~Soren

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  6. I love this! There's always such interesting imagery that comes up when a story is told using so few words.

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  7. Sexy, as usual. :)

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  8. The pic is great...the way the light bounced off your skin.....mmmmmm

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  9. Very nice. Makes my happy parts tingle...

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  10. Sexy and sensual...nice!

    Katia

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  11. Great read, enjoyed as always...

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  12. I'm surprised by the number of people who remarked on the chair rather than the magnifying glass. I do love seeing everyone's interpretations, and yours is no exception. Delicious! Thanks for playing along this week.

    -- PB

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