Friday, June 11, 2010

Flash Fiction Friday!



They slipped semi quietly into the house in their drunken state, 
stifling their giggles as they headed up to the bedroom.

Tossing her onto the bed he crawled in then pulled her on top of his lap, 
teasing her with his erection. She lifted herself up, watching his satisfied smile
then quickly reached below to position his cock upward and slid down. 
His moans louder then hers at that moment.

As she looked over his shoulder and noticed the door ajar and 
his roommate standing in the hallway, watching with cock in hand.

She lowered her head and smiled, always delighting in putting on a show.



 Thank you Panserbjorne for this week's Flash Fiction Challenge of 113 words about the above picture.
(Which I didn't quite make, I'll see you later Panser!)
Please check out the other people who love to word count this Friday!

18 comments:

  1. Umhmm...I like it when they watch. ;) Happy FFF, Gray K.

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  2. mmm sexy I would of invited audience participation!!

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  3. I love being watched .. especilly with the right women !! Excellent take !!!

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  4. Did I mention I like to watch?

    Happy FFF. :-)

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  5. Who doesn't like to watch? ;-) HFFF!

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  6. AzraelAngel's missing from your list; add, if you get the chance. :)

    Loved this one! I was expecting an adultery theme from most but am being pleasantly surprised at the number of people who have NOT gone in that direction. Thanks for playing along this week!

    -- PB

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  7. Ah the voyeur in me loves this ;)

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  8. You really do have away with words, eh Gray? ;) Thoroughly enjoyable!

    Happy FFF!

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  9. You need me, Kimberly. I've come to that conclusion. You just need me...:)

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  10. Oooh, I love this. (The exhibitionist in me approves!) :)

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  11. Watching, but not for long, I bet. You've definitely made me wish I were in your story this week ;)

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  13. And what a good show it would be....am sure!!

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  14. Love this! So sexy to be watched.

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  15. "Tossing her onto the bed"

    Man of action, that one, and he undoubtedly enjoys putting on a show as well... *laughs*

    Happy late FFF!

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